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4 June 2022
- 08:2108:21, 4 June 2022 diff hist +4 Black Tyranno →Battle and Strategy: Made some changes to word choice and fixed some minor grammar. I separated this section into two paragraphs because Battle and Strategy discusses the most efficient strategy to win the battle, but everything after "Ayla's Boulder Toss" is about what doesn't work and why not (rather than what does work and how to do it). Both are equally important points and belong together, but they're about different things so they each deserve their own paragraph. current Tag: Visual edit
- 07:5307:53, 4 June 2022 diff hist +2 m Charm →Meaning of Japanese name: Made a minor edit to make the first sentence feel more complete. current Tag: Visual edit
- 07:3707:37, 4 June 2022 diff hist +359 N Talk:Nizbel II Created page with 'Should 'Nizbel II' have a Battle and Strategy section? That section is mostly about the most efficient way to defeat the boss, and Nizbel II is fought more or less identical t...'
- 07:2107:21, 4 June 2022 diff hist 0 m Nizbel II Minor edit. Missed a pronoun in previous edit. current Tag: Visual edit
- 07:1907:19, 4 June 2022 diff hist +9 m Nizbel II Made some minor edits to pronouns, to keep gender consistent. Nizbel II is a twin of Nizbel (as stated on the 'Nizbel' page) and acts masculine, so it is logical to assume Nizbel II is male. Also removed parentheses in the final sentence. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:0007:00, 4 June 2022 diff hist −11 m Nizbel →Battle and Strategy: Made a some minor edits to keep pronouns and tense consistent throughout, and a few changes to syntax for meanings and flow. current Tag: Visual edit